
lightning striking emotions I can no longer contain
burning my skin with your scathing looks for you have found another
smelling her lilac perfume burns my nose and cuts ridges on my hips
how will your fingers forget the heavenly world you traced on my body
your hands drew life softly in circles, birthing spasms
arousing me with your musky aroma after cutting wood at dusk
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Bravo, Jonikins! You work continues to earn the recognition it so deserves. Well done!
Thank you Brad it has been quit a lovely past seven days. I appreciate what you said because I know you mean it. So thank you from my heart. Love ❤️ Jonikeens
Great for you.
John you follow, post and applaud other peoples work often. Work that I have enjoyed so much. I just want you to know that I appreciate you and you make a difference. ❤️🤗🦋🥰 Big hugs and love, please stay safe, hugs Joni
Thank you. I enjoy sharing other peoples great work.
Well this lady appreciates you. I think your a gracious man that helps connect people in the community, and you write beautifully about the history of the railroads and the important part in which they played in regards to the development of our country. Sending love and have a blessed evening my friend. Love ❤️ Joni
You have a great evening.
Amazing work Joni ❤️
Thank you Ingrid, I am glad you thought so, I appreciate Spillwords and they have been awfully kind to me. Big hugs Ingrid!!
Beautiful, Joni.
Thank you Tim so much. I have enjoyed your amazing work on MasticadoresUSA. Sending you two my love. ❤️🤗🦋🥰💝
Congratulations Joni. Another beautiful emotional illustration. Have a great day. Allan
Thank you Allan so grateful and appreciate your kind comment. You and your sweetheart please be careful. ❤️🤗🦋🦋
A beautiful one. Congratulations Joni!
Thank you so much Terveen. Your kind comments and reading my work are truly appreciated. You must work a sixteen hour day. Hug hugs and love. ❤️
Haha! It is a long day, Joni. Thank you so much! 🙂
You are welcome, you put in some awfully long hours, sending my love and appreciation. xoxoxox
Well done, Joni!
I am sending you two big virtual hugs Tim. Please give my best to your wife and your other loved ones as well. Please be careful and stay safe my friend. Love ❤️ Joni
I’m torn between thinking this is between man/woman or nature/man.
You are so cleaver my wise friend. Colleen it is a bit of both. It is symbolic in that it compares how we can take humans for granted just as we have (at least in the US) nature. Perhaps nature is the better place to wait out this worldly life. You are spot on. Colleen please take good care of yourself and just be real careful for a while. Stay safe my friend, I am sending you a basket of hiking pants, snow boots, wool socks and a picnic with all your favorite books and sweets. Enjoy them. Sending my love as always. Love Joni
I would love to be more immersed in nature. Thank you Joni.
And funny you mention wool socks….I LOVE THEM! 🙂
Yea warm feet 🦶 a must!!!! Big hugs my wise friend. ❤️🤗🤗
Congratulations Joni! Such a powerful poem, passionate, filled with images and with the precise words to create the perfect art in verse. Loved it! All the best to you both and love from Spain!
Francis
Thank you so very much Francis. I am touched by this very lovely and touching comment. I am so happy you enjoyed it. You two have a wonderful and safe day enjoying the beautiful world God gave us. Love ❤️ Joni
Your words are so very meaningful and true Joni, we both enjoy them immensely. Thank you and a wonderful day to you both as well, with our love from Valencia.
A great big hug to you and your dear sweetheart. Please thank her for me and I hope you know how much we both appreciate you two. On with your busy and productive day. Love from the two of us. ❤️🤗❤️🤗💝
Thank you Joni, and we both appreciate you two so much as well. Yes, it has been a busy day but it is winding down now. You both take good care and receive our love. Have a great and blessed evening!
What a beautiful poem…many congratulations to you, dear Joni ❤️
Thank you so much Navin I am grateful that there has been so much activity in our community lately, you launched your first book and soon Ingrid is going to launch hers. How wonderful that so many people are doing so well in the community. Have a truly blessed evening. Sending you lots of love, peace and blessings for this coming year. 🦋🤗❤️🥰
You’re welcome dear Joni…yeah, I’m grateful aa well…so much activity in our community lately…it’s really wonderful…thank you for your wishes…you too have a blessed & peaceful evening…much love ✨❤️💫
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Hon, what a passionate poem. I really enjoyed its intensity. It truly deserves three hearts. Congratulations from the bottom of my heart.
Love and huge hugs. Have a beautiful Wednesday.
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Thank you Dear Button, I finally found your lovely comment in the pending file on my computer. Thank you so much for your very thoughtful comment I am so glad you enjoyed it. Love and many hugs, honeybun xoxoxoxo
I love this line in particular “musky aroma after cutting wood at dusk”, it’s very fitting in using those words to perfect the scene you crafted.
Thank you Cassa, you are a sweetheart. I am glad you liked that line. Have a great rest of your week my friend. Love Joni xoxoxo
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Happy 2022, dearest Joni
What a lovely poem! You write great quality and express feelings in such a fine manner. Wow!
Thank you so much what a very kind thing to say. Happy 2022 to you and your loved ones too. ❤️🤗🎈
Such an intense poem, I felt it! You are amazing my dear friend! Love you
My dear friend Janette. This should have gone into comments, sometimes comments end up in spam or somewhere they shouldn’t be. I am sorry I missed this lovely comment. I am glad you liked my poem. We will talk soon I hope. Sending you my love, hugs and appreciation for your dear friendship. xoxoxoxo
Beautiful❣️ Congratulations on your amazing achievements 🤗💕🌸
I am glad you liked the piece Henrietta. I appreciate your reading and your comments. Sending big hugs. 🤗❤️🦋
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What a beautiful poem with hopes and wishes and yearnings.
Oh thank you. I am so delighted you enjoyed this piece. Have a restful and peaceful weekend. Love ❤️ to you and your family. 🤗🦋🥰
Another brilliant piece, Joni! Sending you love and happy hugs!🥰❤🤗
Thank you sweetie. We are having a lunch by candlelight as our power is out but we are all snuggled and blessed. Sending love to you dear friend. Love you Tiffany ❤️🤗🦋🥰
Sometimes those are the best times, stay warm and safe my dear friend!🥰🔥🕯🪵
Big big hugs sweetie. ❤️🤗🦋
What a gorgeous piece, Joni. Deeply sensual, and wonderfully expressive. A visceral experience. Congrats on the pub! ❤️❤️
Thank you Jeff I appreciate your support and reading my work it does truly mean a lot. Love and hugs, Joni
You’re welcome, Joni. It’s always my pleasure to read you. ❤️🥰
Same here my friend. Sending more love. ❤️🤗🦋🥰
Dear Joni,
Wow this piece truly burns fire in the heart of the matter an your words spill buckets of truth and sadness with this great piece. Congrats on your Spillwords publication. I’ll head there now too! so wonderful 💖💖👏👏
Thank you so much Cindy. Your comment touches my heart. Thank you again and for the kind congratulations. Love, hugs and prayers for complete recovery sweetie. 🤗❤️🦋🥰 Joni
You’re so welcome dear Joni! ‘
It is my pleasure and I’m on the mend! 💖💖🙏Thanks to your soup and bread! 💖
I hope you really are Cindy. My daughter has been feeling sick off and on for three weeks so don’t overdue it’s. Love you 😘
my 2nd dose it was like a month and this one is like 1 1/2 weeks. Thank you truly for the support and I will take heed, promise. Love you so much !💖💖💖
Please do sweetie. Your followers care about you and no one who cares about you will worry if you have read their work. They will just be happy to know your better. So sorry you have had such a bad reaction to the injections. Love you too sweetie ❤️🤗🦋🥰
awwww that is sooo nice. thanks sooooo much dearest friend! 💖💖💖🤗🤗