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Red is the clay that talks to me, dotted with emerald eyes
Unyielding are its walls of love, languid Morocco, where I eagerly wait
Sea winds call to me, as I have seen her movement of sapphire, and cerulean
Cascades d’Ouzoud, like beating hearts your waters drumming, steam moving upwards
Yearning for her hot sands and calm waters, dreams walk with me in the sun
Avowing my name, like the echoes of a hidden cave reaching over the hills
Forged in ancient stone, unbreakable, as my heart travels by white dove
Blue the cloth it holds, my heart’s voice sown in red, between the lines
Soaring far beyond the Atlas mountains to join you, my love
Reblogged this on John Cowgill's Literature Site.
I don’t know what I did to deserve your kindness and great support my friend, but I am grateful.
Have a blessed weekend my friend. Sending love your way via fairies and fireflies carrying this great weight with the help of an angel my gratitude and love. ❤️💕🧚♀️🧚🏻Joni
What did you do? You have great stories worth sharing. You have an amazing weekend.
Thank you my generous friend, love you 😍 Joni
YOU are very graciously welcome wonderful lady. Love you too.
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Morocco a country yet to visit. Blessings to you
I have never been there either. I have always wanted to go. I fell in love with the photograph first and then researched this place. The waterfall there is one of the top 100 in the world. That is where the poem came from. Blessings to you my friend as well. I hope you and all your loved ones are well. Wishing you an amazing weekend. Love 💕 Joni
Hope you are all keeping well too Joni
We are thank you so much for asking my friend. 💕❤️
Beautifully described the place with deep emotions in your sentences. There is stillness in this picture, so much peace in it yet feels like a raging power is hidden within. Great work Joni. I trust you’ve been well. 💕
Thank you my friend. I am grateful this piece touched you my friend.
“There is stillness in this picture, so much peace in it yet feels like a raging power is hidden within.”
You certainly did capture the feeling of this poem. This waterfall is so gorgeous, found pics on line. I fell in love with this artist’s photograph and wrote the poem around the photograph.
Thank you my friend for ready and commenting. I appreciate your friendship and support. Love and blessings to you and yours. ❤️💕💖🙏
Vivid and colorful, Jonikins! You have become a true artist of the descriptive phrase. Well written!
Thank you so much Brad. You know I am always so flattered when you praise my work.
“You have become a true artist of the descriptive phrase.”
You, the master of so many complicated poetic forms. Also an excellent teacher of those forms, which you share with your followers.
Have a blessed and amazing weekend my friend. Thanks again for the high praise. Love and hugs coming to you via flying carriage, loaded with exotic gifts from Morocco. Enjoy them over the weekend. ❤️💕🤗💖 Jonikins
Oh wow!! This is soo beautiful dear Joni♥️♥️ I love this piece with all my heart!
“Avowing my name, like the echoes of a hidden cave reaching over the hills
Forged in ancient stone, unbreakable, as my heart travels by white dove”
The imagery is soo vivid, and mesmerising!!
“Soaring far beyond the Atlas mountains to join you, my love”
Such a lovely line to end this with. Wow.
Love and hugs sweetheart🤗❣❣😍🌷🌷
Have a wonderful weekend!
Love you💞 Ishita
Happy Friday dear Ishita. Thank you for your lovely comments my dear friend. I saw that beautiful photograph and it really inspired me.
“I love this piece with all my heart!”
“The imagery is soo vivid, and mesmerising!!”
I am delighted that you enjoyed this piece. Your kind words mean a lot.
Have a truly blessed weekend dear friend. Love and hugs coming your way. Love you Joni ❤️💕💖🤗
You are most welcome Joni🤗😍
xoxoxo…..
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Wow! So beautiful, Joni😍. I loved it especially the end.
Xoxo 💜💜
Thank you so much sweet Bulbul for your very kind words.
I am delighted that you enjoyed this piece. Thank you for your comment. Sending love and hugs. ❤️💕💖🤗 Joni
Elegant symbolism. I had to click the like button.
Here is a poem by another author that I like
https://soon.school.blog/2019/08/30/plainlove/
Love and peace
Thank you so much. I am delighted you enjoyed it. I will check out your suggestion as well. Hope you have a blessed day. Love to you and yours. Joni ❤️💕
Such a lyrical love letter, Joni. Just beautiful. Have a blessed week, my friend. Love, A. <3
Thank you dear friend. You have an amazing week filled with inspiration and love. Hugs 🤗 my friend, love ❤️ J
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Amazing poetry by a talented writer.
Thank you John my friend for your reblog and kind words. Love ❤️Joni
I always love your work dear Joni and you are welcome.
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Amazing and beautiful use of description dear Joni. You made the reader yearn for things missed.
Thank you my friend for reading and for your gracious comment. I am so glad you enjoyed it. Love ❤️💕Joni
You are welcome dear Joni.
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Truly amazing words… Emotions and thoughts poured with words…
Oh thank you so much my dear friend. I am so glad you enjoyed it. I hope you are having a good week as we approach the weekend. Love Joni
So much love in your work from your fellow writers, it really warms my heart. Again, thank you for sharing your wonderful gifts.
Thank you dear Janette. Yes this community is very kind and supportive. It has been a blessing in my life especially with everything going on. I love and miss you Janette. I find myself wondering when I will see you next. I want to hug you. I am so grateful you and your honey have a place to get away to and enjoy nature, resting and reading. That is such a blessing. Love ❤️ and hugs 🤗. Joni
Thank you for this kind reblog my friend. Love ❤️ Joni
Atlas mountains, that’s so good.
Oh thank you my friend. I appreciate your visit, reading and commenting. Have a blessed evening. Love to you and yours. ❤️💕Joni
Joni Joni! What an exotic journey of words dressed in orchestrations of beautiful, colorful descriptive expressions. You are a poetic genre! Heavenly Hugs to you!🍃🌺❤️🌺❤️🌺🍃☕️☕️☕️☕️☕️☕️
Thank you so much for these very generous words my friend.
“You are a poetic genre.” Wow that is so kind.
So glad you enjoyed this post. Have a marvelous day. Take a cool dip in the pool with some iced expresso and some great blues. Be blessed my friend. Love ❤️ Joni ☕️☕️🤗💕
You are more than welcome. Your poetic words are mentally refreshing. And they uplift the heart and spirt. Again comes my pool dips and coffee! I wish you a blessed, cozy intimate wake with a great cup of java! ☕️☕️☕️🍃Cheers🌺💕🌺
You too my good friend. Have an amazing Monday. Love ❤️💕☕️☕️☕️Joni
I am completely transported in this, Joni… the colors you weave throughout are so vivid and exotic. I love it!
Thank you so much Katy. I am glad you were transported by my poem. I appreciate your kind words very much. Your work is beautiful. I enjoy reading your sad poems too. Often I think people feel they have to apologize for writing about sadness but we all experience sadness. As poets we should draw from all our emotions. Your “sadder poems” are so beautifully written. You are so gifted and I am glad you have a forum to share that gift as a very young woman.
Thank you for reading my work, have a wonderful and blessed day. Love ❤️ Joni