my lingering limbs upon a solitary tree
eyes indigo, darting in a hypnotic state
heart akin to a hummingbird’s wing
Orpheus fashions purity in poetic bliss
fish, even rocks move to trade a kiss
my unsheathe skin lay on Balkan rock
notes from lyre waltz on savory breasts
birds kissing his image on the Aegean sea
smelling him, a ribbon amid my thighs
foreseeing soft touch in darkening skies
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30 thoughts on “My Poem “Son of the Sun” in masticadoresindia”
I was over MasticadoresIndia and its really beautiful Joni.
Thank you so much Mich. I loved the photograph Terveen found, too, so perfect. Big hugs, Joni
Thank you so much, Joni, for you ever constant support and beautiful contributions. 🙂
It is my pleasure and honor to work with you. By the way what an amazingly perfect painting you found. I just think the artwork is amazing, thank you Terveen. Big hugs, Joni
Really beautiful Joni! Such a powerful and artistic way to conjure so many images! Blessings and love from us both!
Thank you so much for your kind words. Blessings and love from the two of us to you two as well. 🦋❤️
You’re very welcome 😊
Beautiful, Joni. 🙂
Thank you so much for reading and your kind comment. Blessings, Joni
Congratulations, Joni! A very beautiful and artistic poem! You deserve it. 👌❤️💐
Thank you so much my kind poetic friend. Blessings and hugs 🦋
You’re more than welcome, Joni 💖
gorgeous Poem Joni! congratulations! 💖💖
Thank you so much Cindy. I am so glad you enjoyed it. 🦋❤️
A masterpiece, as always, Sweet Joni! 🌟
Thank you so much for the kind compliment. It means a lot. 🦋
Amazing piece, dear Joni! ❤️A brilliantly descriptive poem, full of feeling, gradually mounting towards the end.
Thank you so much Anca, your words are like a field of cotton candy, thank you very much. Blessings to you again and for sharing your time with me. xoxoxoxo
Poignant and haunting, Joni!
Thank you from the large part of my heart. 🙏💕🎈🥰
Oh Dawn thank you so much for reading and that very kind comment. Means a lot. Big hugs and love, Joni
What beautiful imagery, Joni! <3 <3 <3
Anna how completely gracious of you to read and your gracious comment on my publication. Sending lots of love to you dear Anna. Love you Anna, Joni
Very beautifully written ❤🌹
Thank you so much d.a. for reading and this kind comment. I appreciate it very much. Love and hugs, Joni
Good Lord. This is so beautiful, Joni. Running over to read in full. Congratulations!!! ❤️❤️❤️
Thank you so much sweetie. Love you KatyDid. ❤️🦋❤️🦋
My pleasure!!! I love You too, sweet JK!!! 💖💖💖
Sending love, hugs, and appreciation, Joni 🤗❤️