inhaling grey dust
my dying skin
red cells pump
time within
your cells mixing
a sour soup
of my regret
our broken loop
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Lovely Joni, powerful and precious, lots of love ❤️ and blessings.
Oh thank you Francis. Sending lots of big hugs and lots of love to you and your dear family. ❤️🤗🦋
You’re welcome Joni! And thank you so much. Love to you both and family as well.
Smile, Joni. 🙂
I am smiling my friend. Thank you Tim. Big hugs. ❤️🤗🤗❤️
Good morning Joni. You have hit the mark on aging and regret with this one. A definite case for living in the moment. Hope all is well. Allan 🤗🤗
Oh thank you Allan. Life is great. I don’t let myself get too caught up in the news because that will break my heart entirely. Do be careful though, you and your lovely wife. I can not believe all the people in our neighborhood who have had Covid. All vaccinated, boostered and not going anywhere much. A twenty year old that was very sick for three weeks. So even with people outside when we are walking I just ask them to keep their distance. New varieties, new symptoms. Just take good care of each other. Love and hugs to you both. 🤗🤗❤️❤️🤗🤗
Yes, the news cycle is getting pretty desperate these days. Covid is certainly not over and we are still living a small life, with very few close contacts. Our son and daughter had Covid and even though they are triple vaxed, it hit them hard. Also a sister and her hubby and last week, some neighbours down the street. Not getting it is job one. The long haul symptoms are not where we want to be. The good news is that spring is here and we are outdoors more. Stay well. 🤗💓🤗
I am sorry to hear your kids were so sick. That is what a nurse told me the other day. After week two she was fine then she spiked a high fever and it was covid post pneumonia which must be treated with antibiotics and steroids. Hope your sister and her husband is better too. Your neighbors too. I am grateful you two are being careful. I live in a bit of a cocoon but I have plenty to keep me busy. I don’t want this. Yes, spring is here and you two will be on many fun hikes I am sure. Big hugs 🤗
Thank you so much, Joni. It’s deep and beautiful just like the poet who wrote it. 🙂
Oh thank you so much Terveen that touches my heart. ❤️
I’ve just read your beautiful poem, Joni…many congratulations…
Oh thank you Navin. You are very kind to me. I love being a part of the Gobblers/Masticadores family. I am still working on my skills at writing. Thank you for your support Navin. By the way I loved Karima’s video “You Brought The Music,” and your contribution. Everyone did such a great job. Have an amazing evening. Hugs, light, love and prayers coming your way. ❤️
You’re very welcome, Joni…the feeling is mutual coz you’ve always been kind to me…the process of learning is constant…so we keep working on whatever we’re working with…yeah, Karima has created an amazing video…thank you for liking my voice…my contribution…have a wonderful day…much love, light, prayers & hugs ✨❤️💫
Karima is special she is a delightful, talented storyteller in another world. You were perfect for her video. You have such a great voice. You have an amazing day my friend. Sending you more love my friend and always prayers. ❤️🤗🎈🦋🌹
“a sour soup
of my regret”
Happy National Poetry Month, Joni! ❤️
Oh Felipe Happy National Poetry Month. Blessings to you my friend. Sending my love. ❤️
🙏 ☺️
Joni, wish you a wonderful life. Age is just a number and you are as young as you think. I think when I was young, I was quite stressed out and as I grow older, I calm down a lot. LOL. And wish you a happy life filled with activities. I mean meaningful activities that will make you satisfied.
What a very tender and loving comment my friend. Age is a number and I am getting more comfort as I grow older. I
am very happy most day and so many can’t say that. For that I am very grateful and feel tremendously blessed. You make sure to do the same with your life which I believe you’re doing. Much love, Joni
A really awesome deeply felt poem Joni. Hugs!🍮🍮❤️
Thank you so very much for reading and your lovely comment. It is always so appreciated. Sending you big hugs and a fresh cup of espresso with a fresh baked scone. Big hugs and lots of love, Joni
Beautiful poetry Joni ❤️💕🌸 Wishing you blessings in abundance
Thank you dearest Henrietta you are so very appreciated. Blessings to you and your family as well. Love, Joni
Beautiful imagery! I always love reading your poems. You write so beautifully Joni and you have amazing talent ❤️💕🌸
Thank you so much Henrietta I really appreciate it. Your words are very kind. Thank you so much and hope you and your family have an amazing weekend. ❤️ love Joni
You keep amazing me with your wonderful words, beautiful, Joni!!!
Thank you Tiffany that is such a kindness you just gave to me. Sending you two lots of love. ❤️🤗🦋
a lovey poem.. heading their to read.. bravo!!💖💖
Thank you Cindy. ❤️❤️💝💝
Always Joni! 💖💖💖