
you ride your bike, crying down the hard dirt road
your morning spent killing flies
their price, a penny a carcass
handing me my money through the soul of their drunken hollow
you wonder, would they spend a penny for me
I buy hot balls in a brown paper bag with my pennies
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Sounds like lonely employment, indeed Joni. I remember doing odd jobs for a few pennies when I was younger. I think Mom used to throw a few cents my way for weeding the garden. Likely why I hate it so much to this day. I did have to swat flies, but that was for free. We never had much, but we always had a roof and food. Hope you are doing well. Allan
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Thank you for reading Allan. I was off line for two days. Thank you so much for reading. I use to weed too but that was good time with my mom. Sober time and I loved any attention I got. We were also poor that never bothered me. Hope all is well with you and yours. Sending big hugs 🤗 and thanks my friend. 🦋🤗
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Oh that brought back the memory of my childhood. I skipped down the local grocery store to buy cigarettes for my father. I was so little, had to reach up to the counter with money, the shopkeeper could barely see me.
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I hope the first two stanzas were happy memories for you. Thank you so much Cassa. Sending my love Cassa. ❤️🤗🦋 Joni
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Joni, this is a beautiful poem, a story, a picture painted with such perfect words and filled with tender sadness…
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Thank you my very kind friend. I appreciate your words so much. Love to you both. 🤗❤️🦋🙏
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You’re very welcome Joni, it’s always a pleasure.
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What a beautiful picture and a wonderful poem to go with it.
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Thank you so much Haoyan Do. Have a blessed day. Big hugs and love. ❤️🤗Joni
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Beautiful poem! Such creative use of language! Such deep emotions! Loved reading it!
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Thank you Dominic. I appreciate you reading my work. Sending you a box of chocolates sprinkled in joy. Big hugs 🤗
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My pleasure Joni! Hugs!
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❤️🤗🦋
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Such a moving piece, Joni! Congratulations ❤️
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Thank you Ingrid I appreciate your thoughtfulness. Big hugs 🤗
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Congratulations on your continuing success! This is a lovely verse steeped with emotion and filled with memories. Well done, Jonikins!
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Thank you Brad I appreciate it very much. Sending lots of hugs and love your way. Have a blessed day. ❤️🤗🦋 Jonikins
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I start to feel a foreboding from the very start. Crying while riding your bike….. what should be fun or quirky childhood memories tainted and sad.
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Pretty perfect analogy of this piece my wise friend. Sending you lots of love and hugs. Thank you so much. ❤️🤗
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It’s really tough, Joni.
Childhood should never be a compromise that suits adults. Take care and many congratulations for the publication. 🙂
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Thank you so much Terveen. You are right of course sending appreciation for your kind comment. Big hugs 🤗 Joni
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Such wonderful write filled with deep emotions…very creative as well…many congratulations, dear Joni ✨❤️💫
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Thank you Navin. You are so kind and generous. You must be awfully busy. I am so happy for you and all your accomplishments this year. You should be so proud of yourself. 🤗❤️🦋🌹
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You’re welcome dear Joni…you’re right, I’m busy these days…not getting enough time to write & post on WP & IG…but I do check & read from time to time…how can I miss beautiful poems like yours…much love dear friend ✨❤️💫
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Thank you Navin your kind words touch my heart this morning. I send you love, prayers and gratitude for your friendship. Big hugs 🤗 🤗❤️❤️
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Awesome writing and so descriptive Joni, as always great poetry🌸💕
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You are so sweet to me Henrietta. It is very appreciated my friend. Blessings!!
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Sound like quite a story Joni and it’s reminiscent of going up the street everyday to buy cigarettes for my mom with a note. I hated it and the smoke and never took a puff ever again!
Your words always leave imprints.. going to read the rest and congrats on 1,000 followers! 💖🌈
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You are so sweet I haven’t said anything. It sounds like a bad memory for you too. Sorry my friend. You say the kindness things. Blessings to you and your family dear Cindy. ❤️🤗🦋
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You’re so right it was. Oh it’s easy with you!
💖🌻🌈
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xoxoxoxo
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